This one was the one they accepted. This one I got some help by an amazing artist by the name of Patricio Betteohttp://www.betteo.blogspot.com
http://www.betteo.deviantart.com PLEASE go look at his stuff. He is bloody brilliant. Anyways, he gave me some tips with the glow that it has as well as some of the foreground shadows and such. I hope you enjoy.